“Happy anniversary dear,” his expression is sour like the Bollinger we drink. “Ten years. Regrets?”
I summon my most expensive smile to answer, paid for in tears unshed. I send my smile down our antique oak table, to shine on him like a crystal chandelier; brilliant, cold, fragile.
I hold my champagne up in a toast to him. A toast to my oh so clean life. Clean of need. Clean of want. Clean of children, affection, love.
I miss your dirt. Your dirty face, your dirty hands, your dirty laugh.
I miss you; I missed you.
“None dear,” I respond, barely.
100 Words
Another Friday Fictioneer’s people thanks to Rochelle at Addicted to Purple. Check out the other stories here!
My take? Inspired by the classic work of Charlie Pride.
I remember listening to these records with my Dad. Ah, nostalgia 🙂
Love to hear your thoughts, your comments!
Cheers
KT
Dear KT,
You say a lot in few words. What a sad marriage. Clean and sterile. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle
🙂
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Oh so sad. Lovely writing.
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Thanks Claire 🙂
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I’d have chucked the Bollie all over him and gone off to get diiiiiirteeeee!
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Ha! I briefly flirted with making her an adulteress, and actually reflecting on a current (dirty) lover, but this is where the words lead me!
Thanks reading and for your comment.
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How to rekindle the flame?
Poignant piece.
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Thanks Mick – rekindle assumes there was a flame to begin with… I’m not convinced.
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Yes, I take your point.
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Great descriptions. Nicely done.
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Nicely done! What a sad life…
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That sounds a very sad and lonely life. It would probably be described by the parties concerned as “acceptable”.
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Such imagery! Beautifully written, KT.
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Great take on the prompt. A loveless marriage, bought and paid for. Well done.
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Well written, descriptive piece about a loveless marriage. So sad, but true in too many situations. Love Charlie Pride!
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Maybe the person she fell in love with was completely different from the one she is married to now.
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Thanks for the music, my Dad used to listen to old country music too. I still love it. “when the new wears off your crystal chandelier” – love that expression and you captured it here. Well done.
T
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Wow. This one blew me away. Your writing was as clipped as the marriage. So polished on the surface and yet so teaming with grit just underneath it. Bravo!
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Thanks Lorna, very kind 🙂
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I’m with Lorna. It blew me away too. Beautifully written, KT.
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Thanks mate, glad you liked it.
Kindest regards.
KT
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Touchy. Nice take on the prompt
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I love that the picture made you think of the song which made you think of the story.
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This was heartbreaking. Well told.
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So much said in so few word. Very well done.
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So easy to slip into the comfort of the silk and chandeliers .. but hey Bollinger is not sour… it’s dry 🙂
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Beautifully written, Kristian. Phrasing such as “paid for in tears unshed” — brilliant!
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Great description, KT. I felt like I was at the table with them. Sad marriage. Well done. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you for visiting my blog. 🙂
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