In the mirror she appears, layer-by-layer; I don her like armour.
Paints, greases, powders, and creams; a wall of fictions against cold appraisal, a shield of chemical lies against judgement.
I construct her for the world on that unwanted and undesirable scaffolding I call myself.
Tinted contacts and tinted hair, lifted shoes and push-up bra; she defies the limitations of my anatomy and my self-esteem.
She is my reflection, she is not me.
Five Sentence Fiction – Lillie McFerrin
What it’s all about: Five Sentence Fiction is about packing a powerful punch in a tiny fist. Each week I will post a one word inspiration, then anyone wishing to participate will write a five sentence story based on the prompt word.
This week’s word: LIPSTICK
Usual story guys: click here to read everyone’s stories, and let me know what you think.
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Cheers
KT
good one, liked it
My take The Red Lipstick
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Thanks:)
I actually have read yours and liked it – the murderer/investigator twist was well done- I just can’t seem to comment? Not sure what the problem is…
Anyway, well done.
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Nice read.
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Nicely done. Nice fit on title and pic
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I’m not sure how she can separate the two if she goes so far along with the mirror, and this goes pretty deep on society pushing towards body dysmorphic disorder of what is acceptable to look like.
Well done.
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Wonderful self-reflection, the mask of herself (I can’t imagine “her” other than a “she”!) 🙂
http://ofglassandpaper.com/2015/08/13/fivesentencefiction-lipstick/
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What an interesting take on the prompt. Loved it!
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Loved the photo and even more the piece. “I construct her for the world on that unwanted and undesirable scaffolding I call myself.” Loved it!
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